Descriptive writing

 Hello everybody today I will show you all of my best descriptive sentences in my writing book.

What one of them do you think is best?

Can you make better sentences than me?

What turbulence is and how a planes works

 Here is a link that will tell you how a plane works Link

Her is a link telling you how a plane works Link

Do you know what turbulence is.

Do you know how a plane works.

Factors 3

 Hi everyone Today I will be showing you factors of 945.

Now that I have shown you factors of 945 I wonder if you can solve factors of 86 if you don't want to you don't have to but could you please try and solve a different factors problem.

If you don't know how to do factors then please click on the link below that will take you to a video please watch over and over again until you understand factors.

Factors link

My water poem

 Hi everyone do you like water?

Well if you do I have something to show you!

Here is a link to see my water poem.

Water poem link

Hope you enjoyed my water poem please leave a comment if you liked it.

Amy and Louie

 Hi I have made up a story about Amy and Louie hope you enjoy it.

Amy and Louie are next door nabobs and best friends. They like Playing with play dough and making towers out of books.

Amy would call Louie everyday with a special word her Mum told her she would say couie Louie and everyday Louie would call Amy with the same special word couie Amy Amy would always come to play and Louie would always come to play with Amy.

One day Amy moved far far away to the other side of the world.

Louie stopped playing with play dough and building book towers.

He asked his Mum if I called Amy very loudly she would be able to hear me wouldn’t she his Mum said no she is at the other side of the world when you are awake she is asleep and when she is awake you will be asleep Louie asked his Dad if I called Amy very very loudly she would be able to hear me wouldn’t she his Dad said no she is at the other side of the world when you are asleep she is awake and when she is asleep you are awake Louie asked his Grandma if I called Amy as loud as I could louder than any one else could she would be able to hear me wouldn’t she maybe said his Grandma it’s only worth a try so Louie called Amy as loud as he possible could COUIE AMY he shouted.

In the morning when Amy woke up she made her way to the breakfast table she said I had the funniest dream last night it was that Louie called me After Amy had lunch she called Louie as loud as she possibly could LOUIE LOUIE said screamed in the morning when Louie woke he had breakfast and told his Mum I had the funniest dream last night it was that Amy called me.

THE END.

Hope you liked my story about Amy and Louie.

Can you make up a story?

Bye

Bar Graphs

 This is my Bar Graph I hope you like it.

Now that you have seen my Bar Graph I am wondering what is your favourite sport?

Mines hockey.

Factors 2

Hi my name is Josh and today I will be showing you factors of 120.

Now that you have watched my video I hope you learnt something.

Do you know factors of 36?